OMG my first critique. Okay here goes nothing.
I really like how you described usher. He is a very complex character. I also like the scene it's just perfect for the scenario. You also let me picture the scene in my head it was wonderful and your words fitted the story completely. I have always loved your stories but this one is by far the best. It's so mysterious how usher loves and hates her at the same time. I so will tell everyone i know to read this.It's such a touching story. keep up the good work and i hope you enjoy this first critique.